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Expert Tips for Novel Writing

Whether you’re working on your first manuscript or your tenth, improving your craft as a novelist requires intentional practice, smart strategies, and proven techniques. This guide covers essential tips and tricks to help you write faster, better, and smarter while avoiding costly mistakes and common pitfalls.

Getting Better Faster

Read Extensively in Your Genre

The fastest way to improve your writing is to study what works in published novels within your genre. Read at least a dozen recently published books in your target category, paying attention to pacing, dialogue patterns, character development, and narrative structure. Take notes on what makes these stories compelling and how the authors handle transitions, tension, and emotional beats. This immersive study is more valuable than many writing courses.

Write Regularly with Accountability

Consistency beats intensity in novel writing. Commit to writing a specific number of words or pages daily, even if it’s just 500 words. Join a writing community, find an accountability partner, or participate in challenges like National Novel Writing Month to maintain momentum. Regular practice builds neural pathways that make writing easier and faster over time, and you’ll complete manuscripts in months rather than years.

Embrace the Messy First Draft

Perfectionists often get stuck on page one. Give yourself permission to write a terrible first draft. Your initial goal is simply to get the story from your head onto the page without judgment. Silence your inner critic, skip scenes that aren’t working, use placeholders, and write “TK” (journalist shorthand for “to come”) when you need to research something. You can’t edit a blank page—finish the draft first, then refine it.

Study Story Structure Systematically

Understanding frameworks like the three-act structure, the Hero’s Journey, or Save the Cat gives you a blueprint for pacing and emotional arcs. You don’t have to follow these rigidly, but knowing the principles helps you diagnose why a scene isn’t working and what’s missing from your plot. Read books like “The Art of Fiction” by John Gardner or “Story” by Robert McKee to internalize these patterns.

Get Feedback from Beta Readers Early

Don’t wait until your manuscript is perfect to seek outside opinions. After your first or second draft, share your work with 3-5 beta readers who match your target audience. Their fresh perspectives reveal blind spots, confusing passages, and emotional moments that don’t land. Feedback accelerates improvement by showing you exactly what needs work before you invest months in self-editing.

Time-Saving Shortcuts

Use Dictation to Speed Up Drafting

Most writers can speak faster than they can type. Use free tools like Google Docs voice typing or invest in software like Dragon NaturallySpeaking to dictate your first draft. You’ll write 2-3 times faster, and the conversational tone often makes dialogue more natural. Dictation works best when you’re relaxed and have your scene clearly mapped out mentally before you start speaking.

Create a Scene-Level Outline

Rather than a traditional chapter outline, create a one-sentence summary for each scene listing the scene’s purpose, POV character, and key events. This eliminates writer’s block because you always know what happens next, and it saves revision time by keeping you on track. A 90,000-word novel typically has 60-80 scenes—outlining at this granular level takes a few hours but saves dozens of hours later.

Separate Writing from Editing

Trying to write and edit simultaneously kills momentum. Dedicate writing sessions solely to forward progress, ignoring typos and awkward sentences. Save editing for separate dedicated sessions. This mental separation removes the critical voice that inhibits creativity and allows you to complete your first draft weeks faster than if you’re constantly stopping to revise.

Use Writing Sprints for Momentum

Set a timer for 25-50 minutes and write as much as possible without stopping. The time constraint creates urgency that silences self-doubt, and the focused intensity produces more words than you’d write in a scattered three-hour session. Sprint writing is especially effective when you’re tired or uninspired—the pressure forces you past resistance.

Money-Saving Tips

Leverage Free Writing Communities

You don’t need expensive courses or coaching to improve. Free resources like Critique Circle, Wattpad, and local writing groups provide feedback and accountability at no cost. Online forums dedicated to your genre offer genre-specific advice. Participate generously by critiquing others’ work, which simultaneously strengthens your editorial eye and builds valuable connections.

Use Free Research and Tools

Before buying reference books or hiring consultants, check your library for research materials. Google Scholar, Wikipedia, and YouTube tutorials provide surprising depth for most topics. For character development, use free tools like character questionnaires found on writing blogs. For editing, Hemingway Editor and Grammarly’s free version catch common issues. Save paid tools and professional editors for your final manuscript.

Trade Editing Services with Other Writers

Instead of paying $50-100+ per hour for professional editing, establish partnerships with other novelists at your skill level. Exchange manuscripts for critique and developmental editing. While professional editors are valuable for final polish, trading with peer writers saves money while providing quality feedback and building your editorial skills simultaneously.

Self-Publish First to Test Markets

Before investing in expensive query letters, agent fees, or traditional publishing routes, consider self-publishing your first novel to test your audience and gather reviews. Amazon KDP and other platforms are free to use. This approach costs only what you spend on cover design and editing, and real sales data and reader feedback help you improve your next book and make informed publishing decisions.

Quality Improvement

Read Your Work Aloud

Your ear catches problems your eyes miss. Read every sentence aloud before submission. You’ll hear awkward phrasing, repetitive word patterns, and dialogue that sounds unnatural. This pass takes time but eliminates the amateur errors that agents and readers immediately notice. Record yourself reading sections to notice pacing issues and where readers will naturally pause for breath.

Show, Don’t Tell Through Sensory Details

Weak writing tells emotions; strong writing shows them through specific sensory details and actions. Instead of “She was nervous,” write “Her fingers worried the fabric of her jacket, and she couldn’t meet his eyes.” Include concrete sensory information—sights, sounds, smells, textures, tastes—that immerse readers in scenes. This transforms telling passages into vivid, engaging prose that readers feel rather than simply understand.

Tighten Dialogue and Cut Filter Words

Remove dialogue attribution tags and filter words wherever possible. Instead of “She said softly, ‘I’m afraid,'” write “‘I’m afraid,’ she whispered.” Better yet, reveal fear through her actions and the conversation itself. Read published dialogue to notice how little authors use “said”—they often skip tags entirely. Strong dialogue is self-explanatory and doesn’t need adverbs. Edit a dialogue-heavy page and cut 15-20% of words through this technique alone.

Develop Authentic Character Voices

Each character should sound distinct through vocabulary, speech patterns, and perspective unique to their background and personality. Create a voice document for major characters listing their speech patterns, favorite words, and communication style. A teenager, a CEO, and a rural farmer won’t sound alike. Test your character voices by reading dialogue aloud and asking whether readers could identify speakers without attribution tags.

Troubleshooting Common Problems

  • Sagging Middle: Your second act loses momentum because subplots ramble or tension drops. Solution: Increase stakes and complications every 5-10 pages, introduce a new character or threat, or tighten your outline to ensure constant forward momentum toward the climax.
  • Weak Ending: Your finale feels rushed or anticlimactic after strong setup. Solution: Your climax should be the longest scene in the book and require your protagonist to overcome their core fear or weakness. Build to a single point of maximum tension rather than resolving multiple loose threads.
  • One-Dimensional Characters: Your protagonist is likable but feels flat. Solution: Add internal contradictions, conflicting desires, and flaws that create internal conflict. A character wanting something desperately while fearing it creates depth and complexity readers recognize as human.
  • Info-Dumping: Early chapters bog down with excessive worldbuilding or backstory. Solution: Weave information naturally through dialogue and action. Readers only need crucial context to start engaging with the story; reveal world details as the plot requires them.
  • Slow Pacing: Scenes drag despite interesting content. Solution: Cut exposition, reduce scene length, and vary sentence length for rhythm. Short sentences create urgency; longer ones slow pace. Use transitions sparingly to maintain momentum between scenes.
  • Unclear Stakes: Readers don’t care what happens because consequences feel undefined. Solution: Explicitly establish what your protagonist stands to lose—emotionally, physically, or psychologically. Higher, clearer stakes create reader investment and tension that drives the narrative forward.